I re-wrote the main scene I need to change to separate those story ideas I’ve been on about and, of course, it seems better if I leave it alone. Though it did give me a few more scenes and conversations I can use later.
It’s mostly the second story feeling empty and flat, though some ideas were good. Still, I have another idea that could continue from the current story and be more fun.
The vibes of the existing story are different with and without the bit I was removing, and there are things I like about both. Also concerns about going too much one way or not using other ideas or characters enough. I mentioned most of that before.
If I leave it, I’m more aware now that it might get unwieldy, but being aware early on helps.
I’d like to plot it out more because I worry it’s going on and on, and not pushing the plot with every scene (it isn’t, and I don’t mind, but maybe I should).
Gotta love so much thinking about it.









