https://youtu.be/-TjfVaEUAlE

After last week's hint, I am now getting in the thick of it

#TheHeirsLair #DemonStorm #DemonStormRemix #HowIWould #fanfiction #myfanfiction #kinda #FixItFic #BirthOfTheStorm #StormAndShadow #BookSky #scififantasyspecfic

#fanfiction #doctorwho #fixitfic #storydevlog #ficdevlog update:
In case it wasn't clear, I'm doing this proper script style, like a profeshunnul.
I'm up to the end of the scene where the doctor /literally/ drops in. The original script has that happen on page 12, and for me, that happens on page 8, as of this draft. I'm now on page 12 - we've had some action, a #redshirt has died, and now I've got all the characters introduced, it's all beating the bad guy. Have to work on the how of that.

#doctorwho #fanfic #fixitfic thoughts: I aim to keep as much plot as possible. Yes, I'm /especially/ keeping timeless child. But I aim to improve it by injecting themes and stakes 🥩🥩🥩.

Which episodes do we think cannot be saved this way? I'm trying and failing to see the point of keeping any of episode 2, for example. Do we need the killer desert planet episode?

Side note: exposition in dialogue is not okay.

Also: slow-burn #thasmin is happening. Sorry, not sorry.