#WritingLifeMonthly

Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-26

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day26 I’m never one to info dump. I like sprinkling info in little nibbles, even if they come with a bite of chili pepper also sprinkled with them.

Writing Life Monthly – 26 June prompt: Have you spread out background details or info dumped?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-25

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day25 I wonder what’s denser: my paragraphs or my Bluesky posts. I’m guilty of both.

Writing Life Monthly – 25 June prompt: Break Up Dense Paragraphs to improve readability.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-25

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day24 I like hacking away at the useless sentences, but I have to be honest, I’m the one who put them there in the first place. Thank goodness for editing.

Writing Life Monthly – 24 June prompt: Does every sentence pull its weight?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-23

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day23 Clichés – I try to avoid them. I’m not always aware when I’m in one bc they’re increasing every day.

Writing Life Monthly – 23 June prompt: Have you used too many clichés?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-22

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day22 Not a problem – I’m not a poet and I absolutely know it.

Writing Life Monthly – 22 June prompt: Watch for Accidental Rhymes: They can be distracting.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-22

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day21 I enjoy snappy dialogue. I hope my readers do, too.

Writing Life Monthly – 21 June prompt: Dialogue Padding: "Well, um, you know..." Cut filler.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-20

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day20 Rhythm! Repetition! I’m on it! Two-thirds of the way through the month and I’m realizing all those things I learned in school stuck. Of course, I have yet to use trig even once.

Writing Life Monthly – 20 June prompt: Sentence Rhythm & Mood: Short for tension, longer for introspection.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-19

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day19 Gosh, I hope my sentences have plenty of variety. It may be crazy old-school of me, but all those sentences I diagrammed in middle school made an impression.

Writing Life Monthly – 19 June prompt: Are too many sentences structured the same?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-18

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day18 I love the vivid descriptions! I’ve spent my last four novels honing those images.

Writing Life Monthly – 18 June prompt: Can you replace generic descriptions with vivid ones?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-17

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day17 I use Word’s Read Aloud feature. It’s a great way to catch everything from typos to proof that the author [hey, that’s me] is babbling.

Writing Life Monthly – 17 June prompt: Read Aloud for Flow: Fix anything that sounds unnatural.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-16

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day16 I trust the reader ridiculously, maybe even too much. Is that okay?

Writing Life Monthly – 16 June prompt: Cut Over-Explaining: Trust the reader to fill in gaps.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-15

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day15 I remember having this conversation in Newspaper class in my sophomore year of high school. #EasterSunday

Writing Life Monthly – 15 June prompt: Redundant Phrases: "Shrugged his shoulders" >
"Shrugged."
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-15

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day14 Well, now, all I can think about are ‘felt’ and ‘noticed.’

Writing Life Monthly – 14 June prompt: Telling Words: Flag words like "felt" or "noticed"
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-13

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day13 In my opinion, there’s way too much inner dialogue. Most of my novels include isolated characters, so it is a pitfall of their solitude.

Writing Life Monthly – 13 June prompt: Internal Thoughts: Too much inner monologue? Too little?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-13

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day12 After I edit my entire manuscript for excess ‘hads,’ I do another loop through to focus on my showing.

Writing Life Monthly – 12 June prompt: Make Descriptions More Specific: Show, don't tell.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-11

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day11 Because the conversation is happening in my head as I think about, write, and edit dialogue so I know who is talking, I do get feedback from beta readers to clarify that it makes sense to others, too. (Damn my cursed subtlety!)

Writing Life Monthly – 11 June prompt: Can you tell who's speaking without tags?
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-11

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day10 I never use the word ‘said.’ I just don’t.

Writing Life Monthly – 10 June prompt: Dialogue Tags: Reduce unnecessary "he said/she said"
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-10

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day9 The hardest part of today’s task is identifying sentences that aren’t awkward.

Writing Life Monthly – 9 June prompt: Clunky Phrasing: Rewrite sentences that feel awkward.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-09

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day8 I’m good with my pronouns (having them beaten into me in elementary and middle school), so I find myself struggling with them when people prefer a plural pronoun. I respect their pronouns, but I get tripped up by those early grammar rules.

Writing Life Monthly – 8 June prompt: Unclear Pronouns: Make sure "he/she/they" is always
clear.
Pam Portland, novelist and bloggerpamportland.org@bsky.brid.gy
2025-06-09

#WritingLifeMonthly #Day7 I do include filler words in dialogue to make conversation sound more natural. Of these three, ‘just’ may be my downfall.

Writing Life Monthly – 7 June prompt: Remove Filler Words: "Just, really, very"

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