“You don’t need to laugh to look funny.”

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“You don’t need to laugh to look funny.”

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506. How do your SCs come across to others? How are they seen?

Uff
- Leroy Jenkins, a hard but fair man in a sort of opposition to Kira.
- William Troika, heartwarming guy, loves music, husband, father of 3 daughters, loves cooking is the "social manager" next to Talisa.
- Rose Draken has this relaxed boyfriend energy, a "bit" nerdy. The AI/computer expert/hacker. Has all the nifty gadgets on the ground & even gets through to Kira in her stubborn moments. Best friend of Kira.
- Talisa, she is the ships "mum/soul"
She knows you, she cares about you, she is the sniper, the one that covers your back with the longinilance system on the ground and the one that thinks and works with portals.
- J. 2 meters tall 2 wide, 2 deep, 200% muscles & flirting, explosives, a heart as big as her whole body.
- Silas Crosby serious but good hearted security chief.
- Mondira Ramann, the way to young Rim export.
#PennedPossibilities 506 #StarRyde #wriring #SciFi #WIP #secondaryCharacters #SideCharacters

#WordWeavers #Wriring 24-11-15 How would your story change if you had to use another MC?

That would be that character's story.
I tell people's stories, not stories with people put in them

#WordWeavers #Wriring 15. How would your story change if you had to use another MC?

The dividing line between MC and SC is thin in my WIP. We see each of their POV at various times. If Shiomi was the narrative character we would see more emotions and a narrator whose perception of what is happening is warped. ITomo would mean a more logical and ego-centric narrative. Kan--chan come in late in the story so it would start at a very different point and the focus would be on the Tomo and Kan-chan relationship.

18.10.2024 How money-savvy is your MC?

This goes to Arkham. As an member of the alliance Arkham has her Ground Income plus the money the alliance pays, she uses this money for a two room apartment in London. She moved their after being chosen by Another LA as the FC of the Ghoz'Tarc. It's not cheap but accumulation of wealth isn't anything she does, the Union provides most goods to levelheaded prices and made sure that ultra rich people don't exist for long.

Arkham spends most of her money for tailored clothing, that doesn't sits to tight on her skin thanks to hypersensitive nature, a subscription at the local food and convenience store, despite the fact that she is rarely at home its more to support the local shop owner because he provides a social spot for others and supports a charity for homeless people. The Union has this problem under control on most member worlds still some people still slip between the cracks.

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Yes, free-writing is like that…

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