If your plots are getting tangled and your characters are falling flat then your readers won't have a good time. You want the best book possible! A developmental edit will give you the tools you need to free your fantasy novel of inconsistencies and strengthen your writing style. By the end, you will be saying "Yes! That's exactly the story I was trying to tell!
Aimée Hill
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Supporting independent authors with communicative line and copy editing. Posts about words, plants and knitting.
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I’ve got it in my head that I’m capable of running 26.2 miles. Running has done so much for me over the last year.
In October, I will be running the Yorkshire Marathon and I will be raising money for Macmillan Cancer Support while I train. 98% of Macmillan's funding comes from people like you who donate to campaigns just like this one. My fundraising goal is £450.
https://www.justgiving.com/page/aimee-hill-1?utm_medium=FR&utm_source=CL&utm_campaign=015
In the vast realm of publishing, the fantasy genre has captured the hearts and imaginations of readers worldwide.
Understanding fantasy readers preferences and expectations can significantly increase your chances of finding a readership for your fantasy novel.
Find out exactly what fantasy novel readers are seeking in my article here: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/how-to-please-your-fantasy-readers
Labyrinth by Kate Mosse uses POV and its massive cast creatively to position you in the most relevant moment in each scene. Is this something you should try?
This review may contain some spoilers!
Read my full book review here: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/book-review-labyrinth-by-kate-mosse
Just a girl and her flask of tea against the world ☕️
Feeling very excited to be at the London Book Fair this week! Join me on my journey, via Cambridge for a quick half marathon (optional)...
@Emmacox Thank you so much for sharing! 😊
@Emmacox Yes! I came across it when reading other people's thoughts on the series. It has made me want to research what is different about the structure of a novel versus the folklore that inspires it!
I enjoy reading books that aren’t my typical taste to see why so many other people love them so much. A Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J Maas is one of these. What can writers learn about genre and plot beats.
WARNING: There are major spoilers ahead.
Read my full book review here: https://buff.ly/YTO26ag
Tomorrow and Tomorrow and Tomorrow by Gabrielle Zevin is a brilliant example of how you can use an unreliable narrator to your advantage in your writing.
This review contains spoilers!
Read the full review here: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/book-review-tomorrow-tomorrow-tomorrow
AJ Editorial Services is four years old! I can’t believe how far I have come. 2024 was my most successful business year so far by every metric.
My favourite metric is enjoyment. I made a list of every book I have worked on in the last 12 months and worked out I had a whopping 85% enjoyment rate.
If the coming year very simply holds more of the same, the same incredible authors and the same amazing community of editors around me, then I would be delighted.
My approach to New Year’s resolutions is unsustainably maximalist. I refuse to do anything to rectify this. I will only ever dream big and see what happens! But rather than throwing my never ending list of silly thoughts at you (one item on the list is literally just “wear perfume more”), I’ve picked three to share with you.
My last goal is cheating a bit since I already have some excellent manuscripts booked in!
Book post! It was actually my husband's order, but I couldn't resist this adorable little book.
How widely do you read? When I work on developmental editing with authors, I find it near impossible not to recommend books beyond the genre that they write. There is so much to learn from so many writers. Sticking to what you know feels limiting.
Happy New Year!! Whether you’re a New Year, New Me kid or a See Where the Year Takes Me kid, I wish you the best of 2025s ❤️✨
Merry Christmas to all who celebrate ❤️❄️ If you need me, I’ll be making a start on my new books!
As a fantasy author, what are the benefits of having a specialist editor rather than a general editor?
Well, crafting an immersive fantasy narrative demands meticulous attention to detail and a keen understanding of the genre's unique nuances. A specialist fantasy author with genre-specific expertise can transform your manuscript.
Read more in my blog post here: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/why-hire-a-specialist-fantasy-editor
From enhanced production quality and expert casting to time and cost efficiency, working with audiobook production professionals ensures your audiobook captivates listeners and stands out in the competitive audiobook market.
If you're an author seeking to transform your written words into an unforgettable auditory journey, an audiobook producer is undoubtedly a wise investment..
Read more in my blog post: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/the-benefits-of-audiobook-production-team
Finding a literary agent may seem like a daunting task, but with careful research, perseverance and a professional approach, you can increase your chances of finding the right representation.
Remember take the time to find an agent who truly understands and appreciates your novel.
Find my top tips for choosing the right agent for you in my blog post here: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/getting-an-agent
After a once-in-a-lifetime trip, I am back at my desk. It might not be as glamourous as travel, but I’m honoured to be working on two fantastic novels this month. I’ll get the kettle on.
In the competitive world of fantasy novel publishing, understanding what readers are looking for is essential for success.
If you're an aspiring fantasy writer, you might be wondering what fantasy novel readers are seeking in books they pick up.
For some tips, check out my blog post on ‘Pleasing Fantasy Readers’: https://www.ajeditorialservices.com/post/how-to-please-your-fantasy-readers
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