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Thoughts on Fever (発熱への思い)
Monoku & Waka & Katauta

•─────⋅☾#ものく☽⋅─────•

Sanuki Tenman-tennō Greets You with Single Flower
讃岐天満宮が一輪の花でお出迎え

•─────⋅☾#和歌 ☽⋅─────•
Title: Sanuki Tenman-tennō Greets a Flower
題 : 讃岐天満宮、花を迎える

Wild hill
Evening flowers
Too soon frost
Petal dropping
Morning dew forgot

•─────⋅☾#片歌☽⋅─────•

A cool hand
Your gentle touch
Bedtime fever

You can take what you want from my katauta; one reading is rather ecchi. But it was about how cool a hand feels when you have a fever. Lol

私のカタカタから好きなものを取ってくれて構わない。でも、熱があるときの手の冷たさについてだった(笑)

一読は割とエッチです。

#WakaPoetry #和歌 #poetry #詩 #poetrycommunity
#Flowers #花 #Mortality #死亡 #必滅 #KonbiniIdol #HaikuFeels #Senryu #川柳 #Tanka #短歌 #Monoku #katauta #Fever #熱 #熱病
@poetry

#MastoPrompt 07/2 #Effuent
#Katauta

•─────⋅☾#片歌☽⋅─────•

One percent
On a golden throne
Effluent wealthy

#NMMP #NMPrompts
#senryu #PoetryOnTheFly #poetry #poetrycommunity
#Political
@poetry

#WSS366 07/2 #Clear

#Blue 番 2

#Monoku: (< 17, no caps or punctuation)
#Haiku: (5-7-5 metre)
#Katauta: (5-7-7 metre)
#Waka: (5-7-5-7-7 metre) #WakaPoetry

I use morae not syllables

•─────⋅☾#ものく☽⋅─────•

Clear blue fearless lemming

•─────⋅☾#俳句☽⋅─────•

For clear blue
Fearless lemming
Promising

•─────⋅☾#片歌☽⋅─────•

For clear blue
Fearless lemming
Promise return

•─────⋅☾#和歌 ☽⋅─────•

Wind in face
Clear blue around
Brave lemming
Gold haze approach
Promise return

#NMWCC #NMPrompts
#senryu #PoetryOnTheFly #poetry #poetrycommunity #HaikuFeels
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#Wss366 7/1 #Cool

#Katauta #片歌

A cool hand
Your gentle touch
Bedtime fever

#NMPrompts #NMV366
#senryu #和歌 #PoetryOnTheFly #poetry #poetrycommunity #Fever #熱 #熱病
@poetry

#WritersCoffeeClub 06/27. Share an experience of writing in a restrictive format Part 3

#Blue 番 1

#Monoku: (< 17, no caps or punctuation)
#Haiku: (5-7-5 metre)
#Katauta: (5-7-7 metre)
#Waka: (5-7-5-7-7 metre) #WakaPoetry

I use morae not syllables

•─────⋅☾#ものく☽⋅─────•

suddenly blue hilltop screaming down

•─────⋅☾#俳句☽⋅─────•

A hilltop
Suddenly blue
Scre… down

•─────⋅☾#片歌☽⋅─────•

A hilltop
Suddenly blue
Screaming down

•─────⋅☾#和歌 ☽⋅─────•

A hilltop
Suddenly blue
Airy leap
Gold haze below
Screaming down

#NMWCC #NMPrompts
#senryu #PoetryOnTheFly #poetry #poetrycommunity #Sky #上空 #上空 #Hill #丘 #HaikuFeels
@poetry

Poetry: Communication vs. emotion

Depends on the poetry. There are a couple of poetic styles that are about communication. They are used in cultures other than ours though. Ones that tolorate ambiguity and value "sophisitcation."

The following is an edited clip from a scene set in the 10th century Japanese Emperial court. It uses katauta a three line varity of waka designed for "sophisticated" communication.

Empress speaks asking why the characters have bee brought to her.

          What is here,
          Rabbit, pheasant,
          The coop forsaken?

Seer explains why

          Bound by fate,
          Sakura royal frog.
          Sea beyond the well.

Empress reprimands other seer for bad advice about not seeing the characters.

          Lotus Crow,
          Croaked of dangers.
          Now Sakura revealed.

Other seer offers his excuse

          Inauspicious,
          Was sakura then.
          Now fruit ripen.

Empress warns that she is displeased and the the seer risks punishment.

          Foolish crow
          Flying near the sun.
          Beware the scorching.

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@ringles
@mariam_al_masri_author
#Poetry #katauta

Most of the poetry I write now aday is context dependant and appears in my novels. I posted a couple today where I modified the last line to be context independent.

Tenth century
Nobles and poets,
Show off copious ryhme.

#Katauta #Waka #Poem #Poetry #poetrycommunity

I am mainly writing #waka (classic Japanese poetry) because it's what I am using with my novel.

Some #haiku, #kyoka, and some #katauta

#writerscoffeeclub #writing 25. How long is the shortest story you've ever written? Can you link to it? 2/2

Kitsune says

Wary kitsune
Dances in the dusk
Far from shadow plain

Tomo response

Kitsune rhyme
Morning glory vines
Woodland tangles

This is the shortest I have done resently. It was part of katauta exchange between two characters the first a kitsune.

Katauta is a type of waka japanese poetry. Each preson composes a three line 5-7-7 morae verse to talk to each other. I rather like the my character's response.

#Poetry #ShortPoem #Waka #katauta #tanka #konbiniIdol #kitsune