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My First Book Sprout Review for The Alvarez Girls—And It Was Worth the Rewrites!
I just got my first-ever review for The Alvarez Girls on Book Sprout, and let me tell you, I am living for this comment:
Mind-blowing. This did not end at all how I thought it would. I’m still kind of stumped at the whole story.
LOL. LOL. YES. That’s exactly what I wanted! When I write, I don’t aim for predictability—I want my stories to grip the reader, pull them in, and leave them stunned by the final pages. So, hearing that my plot twist genuinely surprised someone? That’s the kind of validation that makes all the blood, sweat, and re-re-re-rewrites worth it.
For those who don’t know, I started using Book Sprout to get more reviews and push ARCs out to early readers. I also use Book Funnel (because what’s the point of putting stories out there if no one reads them?). And this review? It hit in all the right ways.
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Of course, the reviewer also mentioned that they felt like they missed something and that some parts in Spanish confused them. And you know what? I’m okay with that. Looking back, The Alvarez Girls is a fast-paced novella. If I ever rewrite it in the future, I could unthread a few things to make it feel more complete. But what matters to me is that the reader still enjoyed it.
I also appreciate that, even though this reader doesn’t speak Spanish, they acknowledged that those parts were harder for them to comprehend. I totally get that. I don’t typically translate Spanish in my books because I want the language to feel natural, not like a footnote. That said, I am always exploring ways to make translations feel organic so that the flow isn’t interrupted.
And yet, despite any confusion, this reader embraced it all—the parts they didn’t fully grasp, the moments that stumped them, and still walked away enjoying this bilingual, culturally rich story. That gives me so much hope and motivation.
But let’s go back to that ending. The fact that it surprised the reviewer as much as it did me? That’s where the magic is. Here’s the thing—I discovery write. Which means I don’t outline ahead of time (or if I do, I inevitably ignore it). Instead, I write my way into the story, let it unfold organically, and—yeah—rewrite it from scratch. Sometimes upwards of seven times. Mrs. Franchy’s Evil Ring? That one had ten rewrites.
It gets on my nerves sometimes, no lie. But moments like this? They remind me why I do it. If the story can surprise me, then it can absolutely surprise the reader.
And that? That’s worth every single rewrite.
Have you ever read a book that completely took you by surprise? Drop your recommendations in the comments!
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I had a great #WritingSprint this morning before work getting another 1,200 words into my WIP. Again, more change in outline. Something tells me I’ll be #DiscoveryWriting the second half of this book and toss the outline aside. I’m currently juggling 5 POVs in this final book in the series so it’s fun.
youtube suggested a video on #StoryStructure and I couldn't resist watching it.
Now I learned in 30 min how easy it is to develop a story in a very very short time and it even becomes fun!
And still you can pant, plant and discovery write as much as you want. Or #plot and construct. Also very inspiring for editing what you already have.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DDTUH4r4az0
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83k words in, 17k more to go, and I have NO idea how I'm going to bring this book to where it needs to be when it's finished. I have my mark to hit for book 3, and we're a mile off from there. Man have I destroyed my outline this time around. I'm discovery writing with my pants off! 🤣 😭 Strangely, though, it feels good. The words are flowing and really like how the characters are evolving.
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Focus is overrated
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