#EroticMusings 2025.0608 Week 2 (June 8-14) Craft: Do you intentionally experiment with new techniques? Share an example! (If you want to.)
I am going to take "techniques" as writing techniques. I am ill qualified to talk about me or my partner's prowess. In a sense, this is spoilers for the Reluctance series stories.
New techniques? Yes, I have to. What I'm writing now skirts the boundaries of propriety, saying a lot without saying much. It is ancillary to the novel, yet it and the gender roles depicted are also a major plot point in the story. I work to write what the characters feel, and their adventures, but I don't use the vernacular at all, which would color it in ways that I find unappealing. Thus you'll find plenty of wordplay and the playful use of rhetoric, utilizing the lesser used meaning of words or phrases, reusing unrelated words or phrases that context will clarify, and, rarely, making up words. Innuendo proves useful, too. Moreover, by not describing anything except what interests the character, skirting full descriptions that other authors insist on giving to fit the context of the reader rather than the context of the POV character, the reader will build up a picture of what's happening until they "get," for example, what the characters are wearing.
A reader's imagination is far better than authors often give them credit for.
In the following excerpt, the MC refers to what in our society is her boyfriend, Streak. If you read the story carefully, and read this excerpt carefully, you'll understand what she's comparing having passed the test to. I highlighted the sentence. In the context of the story, it is 100% obvious, yet never stated.
…By the way, you passed the test."
"Passed?" I sat hard in the chair. My tail bone stung. "I passed!?" Tears streamed down my cheeks; my whole body felt electrified—possibly more so than after Streak's best effort. I felt powerful. The release of tension felt amazingly good. I shivered, delighted beyond measure, craving more. Silently, inside: Yes!!!
You might characterize this post as utilizing the described technique, which is why I did not CW.
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