#REVISION

RS, Author, Novelist, Prosaistsfwrtr@eldritch.cafe
2025-05-07

@EdwinDownward

What if I missed something [in what I sent to the beta readers] and What if I created a new error [editing after sending to the beta readers]?

This is the scourge of the rushed and easily distracted who have tasked themselves with doing the least fun part of being an author. It's no wonder that the big names in writing have staff.

If your text editor has change tracking, turn it on. Pages on the Mac, and MS Word has it. Chances are open source alternatives have it to, or should. I haven't seen a web suite that has it.

Scrivener lets you take snapshots. You need to be aware the feature IS NOT automatic, and you have to be conscientious to us the feature.

Add the beta changes as you receive them (maybe even adding nonprinting comments), and any changes you yourself make with change tracking on.

The next pass, take care only to change stuff in the changed areas. You can print to PDF and you will get change bars in the margin for reviewing.

It helps. Not perfect, but it narrows what you have to Review Yet Again.

HTH

#BoostingIsSharing

#writer #author #revising #revision #writingCommunity #writersOfMastodon

RS, Author, Novelist, Prosaistsfwrtr@eldritch.cafe
2025-05-06

RegEx for Speedy Story Revision

Here are the current iteration of these two RegEx search strings. I will update this post to keep it up to date. The \b requires a beginning- or end-of-word to maximize exact matches. The (?: ) is a non-replacing grouping for multiple words with similar issues, and for he/she matches. Depending on your writing, you may want to change the pronouns to he|she|it|they. Both RegEx rely on NOT selecting Case Sensitive for searches.

  • Negative Protection and Homonyms:

can\b|can't|can not|could\b|couldn't|cannot|shall\b|shan'|shall not|shoud\b|shouldn't|should not|would not|\bwould\b|\bwouldn't|\bwith\b|without|write\b|\bright|lead\b|\bled\b|lede|choose|chose|lose|loose

  • Weasel and Hedge Words:

ly\b|\babout\b|almost|already|barely|\bbit\b|begin|\bbegan\b|\can|certain|generally|\bguess|\bjust\b|kind|\blike|maybe|mostly|near|course|pretty|perhaps|possibly|potentially|really|probably|\bseem|\bsome\b|sort|start|\bstill\b|surprisingly|suppose|\bthink\b|usually|could|\bsaw\b|\bheard\b|\bfelt\b|\bknew\b|\bread\b|noticed|recognized|\band\b|\bbut\b|(?:I|he|she) could (?:see|hear|taste|touch)|(?:I|he|she) (?:saw|hear|knew|read|felt|noticed|recognized) that|you can|made certain

If you use #Scrivener, this is the procedure for turning these searches into Binder/Left-sidebar buttons on the Mac, though probably similar on Windows:

  1. Click the combo-button for Search.
  2. Select Search in Project.
  3. Copy-Paste a RegEx string and press Enter.
  4. Note to the left inside the search control there is a magnifier and a combo-button. Open it. Select at minimum RegEx. I also select the name of my drafts folder, which is Manuscript, and Text so only what I want to revise is shown in the binder. Turn off Case Sensitive if on.
  5. Click Save Search as Collection.
  6. Provide a name in the dialog (it initially displays the RegEx string).
  7. Click View > Binder (if not already check marked).
  8. Click View > Collections (if not already check marked).

If you need to update a collection, use this procedure:

  1. Click the RegEx search collection in the binder. This displays it in the search control.
  2. Copy it from the search control.
  3. Press the minus button in the + - shown to the right of Collections. This deletes only the selected existing search collection. There is no way to directly update a search collection.
  4. Paste your revision.
  5. Follow the first set of instructions to recreate the collection.

On the iPad and iPhone, RegEx search exists but only finds a single word or phrase at a time. Disappointing, but it works. You will find RegEx which you tap gear icon when using Find. You can't save the search, but I put it in the Notes app so I can reference it easily.

The image shows Weasel and Hedge Words in use. In the top left, you'll see the search box with the RegEx, and below it my two collections which are titled 🔍Positives and Negatives and 🔍Weasel and Hedge Words. Note the highlights. Desktop Scrivener shows all matches, making quick review and revision a snap. I've added "and" and "but" and "ly" to highlight overuse of conjunctions and adverbs. There's also double-word error highlighted.

May your editing, revising, and review be simple and swift!

#BoostingIsSharing

#Writer #Author #WritingCommunity #WritersOfMastodon #Revise #Revision #Editing #RegEx #search

The image is a screen capture of Scrivener running with a RegEx search turned on. Some words are highlighted in purple, and is of little use if you aren't sighted. I am not sure the app has accessibility features or whether the highlights are pronounced by a screen reader.
2025-05-02

Whoops, my years old account at discuss.KDE.org seemed to be just "suspended for being probl. a spambot" by, I think, the Moderation team😮

My guess the reason is I linked to the #Revision #demoscene Party 2025 two weeks ago when someone replied to me concerning Amiga chip tunes, today. Either colleteral damage or someone that's too young to know or they just don't want linking to external sites like this...

Oh, well... whatever... So no posting possible about #plasma 6 on #FreeBSD from me over there, anymore🤷‍♀️.

#kde #discuss #plasma

2025-04-28

Only two days left of #AmigApril

This Easter weekend was the Revision 2025 Demoparty in Saarbrücken, Germany. I never was at a demo party but somehow I got caught up in the live stream. That was quite fun. Looks like a combination of a Lan Party, a hacker conference, a festival and a party 😀

So here is a nice demo that was release there: Lupus Reditus by Tristar & Red Sector Inc. & Mystic

#retrocomputing #retrogaming #amiga #commodore #demoscene #demo #revision #revision25 #revision2025

Victoria Krb RetroGeek BlogVictoriaFerryRetroGeek@piaille.fr
2025-04-24

Yes it is, the #neogeo #demo that reached 2nd place last week at #revision #demoscene party, will run on the next version of #MAMEMinimix on Amiga #pistorm It's called #Vaporous and is only the second demo ever made on the SNK console. #demoscene #retrogeek #wazaaaaaa

2025-04-23

MASTER BOOT RECORD (MBR) at Revision 2025 -
...where metal meets chipmusic - live - in a perfect way.
nodeponds-nerdletter.de/master
#Chipmusic #Demoscene #Revision #Metal
#newsletter #computerart #art #arts #creativecode

mopmopmopmompmopmop
2025-04-23

still exhausted after 😂 the code for the little thing I live coded during the seminar can be found here:

gist.github.com/m0ppers/d660e5

and the code for the "schrabbelbär" demo (which was originally intended to be live coded) can be found here:

gist.github.com/m0ppers/65e53a

🇵🇱 Seban/Slight 🇺🇦seban
2025-04-22

Revision 2025 is over, and there were some truly mind-blowing productions… One that really captivated me was Epitaph for the Living by Andromeda Software Development. It’s the kind of demo that probably won’t appeal to most people, but I keep coming back to it, completely fascinated. Darkness, gloom, and a sense of dread seep through the visuals to a point where the atmosphere becomes almost suffocating… It gives me bigger chills than リング (Ringu).

youtu.be/iFt4dwGaBSs?si=zbYCrL

Marcel Stritzelbergermarzlberger@mastodon.online
2025-04-22

3D Demo 3: The Last Drop by #Lemon

Oh Lord, was da wieder aus einer #Amiga #OCS Platform rausgekitzelt wurde sprengt echt jeden Rahmen. Irre!

Oh Lord, what's been teased out of an #Amiga #OCS platform is really beyond belief. Crazy!

#Revision2025 #Demoscene #Demoszene #Revision #Oldskool

youtube.com/watch?v=-lgXhGth31U

Schiftzug "3D Demo"
2025-04-22

@totetmatt first, thanks so much for all you did. those livecoding events are always a highlight for me at #revision. This year was no exception, your efforts and dedication really shows and really translate into banger moment. Kudos again, a billion thanks. Then, about submitting prods, well do as you can. We are always so happy to see more of your work, don't burn yourself out that's all... we care about you. You are definitely doing things very right so don't worry too much!
:blahaj_heart:

2025-04-22

#Revision #rabenauge #demoscene #3dgfx
And the Legend Continues" by Luisa / Poo-Brain ^ Rabenauge

demozoo.org/graphics/371061/

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Das Bild zeigt eine bunte Jahrmarkt-Szene mit der großen Aufschrift „LETZTE CHANCE“ in leuchtenden Buchstaben. Im Hintergrund sind Riesenrad, Karussells und farbenfrohe Dekorationen wie Luftballons und bunte Lichter zu sehen. Der Rahmen des Plakats ist mit Glühbirnen beleuchtet. Im Vordergrund stehen Tische mit Gläsern und Stühlen, daneben weitere Luftballons. Die Atmosphäre ist festlich und lebendig. (KI-Grafik)
Keldrim :verified_paw:Keldrim@meow.social
2025-04-21

Im always keeping an eye on the #demoscene there is not a single more amazing cooking pot of code/tech wizards out there. But the demo done be LFT this year at #Revision on a #Pico2 #RISCV #RISC_V core, in bare metal RISC-V assembly takes the cake. Just amazing.

youtube.com/watch?v=KhhLoVBpg48

Michael Carrollneffo@mas.to
2025-04-21

What's the story with the Love Jesus group in #Revision?

#revision2025

Gerard Braadgbraad
2025-04-21
2025-04-21

Bardzo irytują mnie reklamy ruskich imprez na głównym projektorze, nasuwa mi to złe myśli o władzach gminy^W^W organizatorach wydarzenia.

To, jak i mnogość innych znaczeń, można zawrzeć w jednym prostym „kurwa”.

#revision2025 #revision #revisionparty #revisionparty2025 #demoscene

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